beta?

ladycat777 says my fic is ready for a final beta. She's much too close to it, though, and can't beta it herself. So does anyone want to take a stab at it and get it ready for posting? All I need are some line edits, I think. The fic is femslash (f/f and f/f/f), NC-17, and clocks in at 22,241 words.

Now that the fic is 'finished', I don't know what to do with myself. I've been writing nonstop for days now, and it suddenly feels like I have nothing to do.

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I am really in the mood to talk about writing. Ask me questions, and I will do my best to answer. Post your thoughts about writing and I will nod and talk right back.