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working on a new book. today I rewrote my opening. it's better now, I think? still not saying exactly what I want it to, but it's better.

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[pattrose]

It sounded and looked good.

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Did you peer through the computer to see it, that you can say this so confidently? lol

I added a sentence to the post to make it clearer what I'm talking about. A book!