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green ([personal profile] green) wrote2019-05-25 04:08 pm
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This morning I posted Welcome to the Fire, Zhao Yunlan's POV of what I'm lovingly calling drunk night.

And today I wrote about 1280 words of Shen Wei's POV of drunk night, moving into the morning after. Shen Wei is ridiculous, he really is. I love him to pieces but he can be an idiot. Pining! Misunderstandings! EEEEEE! I showed what I wrote to Bee, wondering if maybe there's TOO MUCH pining. Her response was like, "There's only too little pining or the correct amount of pining. There is no such thing as too much pining."

WHAT CAN YOU DO
syriala: weilan with the sprawl and without shoes (weilan)

[personal profile] syriala 2019-05-25 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS TOO MUCH PINING. I stand by that point. At least you didn't bring in the Hanahaki (yet) so clearly there's room for more pining ;)
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[personal profile] syriala 2019-05-25 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
But see that just means no one is dying from the pining so clearly there's room for more pining.
syriala: beautiful smiling shen wei (smiling Shen Wei)

[personal profile] syriala 2019-05-25 09:57 pm (UTC)(link)
No because if it only feels like dying the other one (who is also pining) can't fret over the other, thinking he has no right to worry like this because STUPID REASONS AND PINING
syriala: shen wei caringly putting his jacket on zhao yunlan (the jacket)

[personal profile] syriala 2019-05-25 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I give up. Clearly you are not ready to see the light (And you haven't been listening properly ;) )
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[personal profile] teaotter 2019-05-25 11:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I had to look up hanahaki, and I've now realized that I need to read a million stories with it. Thank you!
syriala: weilan with the sprawl and without shoes (weilan)

[personal profile] syriala 2019-05-26 06:21 am (UTC)(link)
Hanahaki was a gift to fandom in general and can you even imagine Shen Wei catching it? So much pining with such horrible consequences.
bonibaru: boot heel! (Default)

[personal profile] bonibaru 2019-05-25 10:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Bee is correct. There is either enough or none.
kimboo_york: Weilun in profile (Weilun-faces)

[personal profile] kimboo_york 2019-05-25 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
I AM SO EXCITE OMG OMG OMG *muppet arms of flail*

And yes, Shen Wei is ridiculous. Possibly the only one who might be more ridiculous is Ye Zun? IDK but I suspect this is part of why Yunlan loves them. ahahahahaaaa

I am in desperate need patiently waiting!!!!
kimboo_york: erotic slash lapsitting (Boys)

[personal profile] kimboo_york 2019-05-25 11:52 pm (UTC)(link)
For me this is like a twofer deal so really I have no complaints. :D

(also that scene in your icon, jfc -- I'm not into underage (tw why you such a trauma for me?) but...that scene. Peter, unf)
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[personal profile] teaotter 2019-05-25 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
It's true, there is no such thing as too much pining, especially in any fic that has Shen Wei.
lynndyre: (shen wei - smell)

[personal profile] lynndyre 2019-05-26 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
This is excellent because I was about to leave a comment wondering what Shen Wei was thinking through it all! NOW I GET TO KNOW!! XD

(icon is for Shen Wei fishing his brother out of a sad puddle of drunken angst)
maggie33: Infanta Margerita - Las Meninas, Diego Velazquez (zhu yilong)

[personal profile] maggie33 2019-05-26 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
Ohhh, the next part in the pining and angst saga - I can't wait for Shen Wei's POV. :)