Fic: Point Work (Kirk/Sulu, NC-17)

[green]

Title: Point Work
Author: Green
Pairing: Kirk/Sulu
Rating: NC-17
Summary: There were three things at which Sulu was tremendously apt: flying, fencing, and fucking.

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There were three things at which Sulu was tremendously apt: flying, fencing, and fucking. He didn't think of them as the Three Fs or anything like that. He didn't really think of them at all; he just did them. He was a natural.

Flying was an art, just like fencing. He could manuveur a ship through treacherous space as easily as slicing through a target. It was all a matter of lunges, flicks, and feints.

And although not a sport, fucking had an artistry all its own. There was the beginning footwork as two people got to know each other, a dance of sorts that led straight to the mat. Or to bed, if one was handy.

Most people did not think of fucking in terms of opponents and point work, but Sulu liked the control it gave him. His partners never minded.

Kirk liked it when Sulu lunged forward, pining him to the mattress. Sulu used his tongue as a foil, stabbing Kirk's mouth and nipples wetly. He navigated Kirk's body as smoothly as he flew.

Fucking Kirk was a dance of control and excitement. Kirk said, "Harder," and Sulu teased him. Kirk said, "Slow," and Sulu thrust faster. Kirk gritted out, "Bastard," and Sulu just grinned.

Right now, Kirk was pressed down with his knees to his chest, panting hard and swearing harder. "Fuck, fuck, c'mon, fuck me," he said, and Sulu thrust deep and hard inside him.

Their groans rose up, getting louder as they both got closer to coming.

Kirk was still saying, "Fuck me," in a mindless way, like a mantra. And Sulu reached around and took hold of his cock, stripping it fast and hard, and Kirk finally came, clenching around Sulu's cock.

Fucking into Kirk was like making the winning point, and coming felt like a triumph.

END

Comments

[wistfuljane]

<3<3<3! The opening line is just perfect because yes.

[green]

Yay! Thank you, bb. <3

[athos]

The pairing ain't my cuppa, but that last line was something else. Oh yeah. :D

[green]

Thank you! ♥

[gwenny]

damn! *melts*

[green]

Thanks! :D

[helens78]

OHGODHELLYES. This is awesome and brilliant and yes, I totally believe that Sulu is utterly kickass at flying, fencing, and fucking. And SQUEEEE to him getting Kirk to the point of calling him a bastard. :D :D :D

[green]

:DDDDDD

Thank you so much!

[helens78]

I don't know if you follow either comm, but suluismycaptain and chromatic_fanfic would definitely welcome this fic, or a link to it. ^_^

[green]

I hadn't thought to link it around because it's so short, but I will do that!

[helens78]

*cheers!*

[amadi]

As the mod of chromatic_fanfic, I gotta say I am so glad you brought this to us, and if you have any more lovely little nuggets of Sulu-ness please share those too! This was yummy and wonderful.

[green]

Thank you for the lovely feedback and warm welcome! :D

*startled*

[ilyena_sylph]

Wow.

This was great, and I love the look into Sulu's head here. Wonderful.

Re: *startled*

[green]

Thank you very much! :D

Re: *startled*

[ilyena_sylph]

Clarification! Startled because this isn't a pairing I'd ever thought of, not saying anything about your writing or the like!

And you're welcome.

Re: *startled*

[green]

LOL thank you for the clarification. ;)

Re: *startled*

[ilyena_sylph]

You're welcome. *wry grin*

My fingers are faster than my brain, sometimes.

[mythicdove]

I usually like a little McCoy in there, but I tell you this was a great fic! Loved the opening line, and I loved how you captured Sulu!

[green]

Thank you!

[kerrypolka]

:9

yeah, I got nothing. OTHER THAN HOW HOT IT IS WHEN KIRK'S A BOTTOM AND SULU IS >:D-FACING.

[green]

:DDDDDDDD

TY, BB!

[saavikam77]

Whoo!! \O/ *fans self* Yes, I *definitely* like Sulu in charge. *evil grin*

[green]

\o/

Thank you so much!

[elke_tanzer]

Yay hotness!!

[green]

Yay feedback! :D

Thank you.

[azurelunatic]

♥

[green]

Thanks! ♥

[bridgetmkennitt]

Hello. I'm just letting you know that I've recced your work at chromaticvision on IJ. Thank you for creating a memorable work featuring a character of color. <3

[green]

Thank you so much for letting me know. :)