Just got it a little while ago. Was there anything in particular you wanted me to read for, before I begin, or just general spelling/grammar/you-left-out-a-punctuation-mark-here stuff?
If anything strikes you as off, or needs fleshing out, please let me know. Otherwise, do whatever you want. I'm not fragile when it comes to someone picking apart my first draft. :)
(and if you just want to do general spelling/grammar/punctuation mark stuff, go for it)
The sex felt, to me, a little stilted. I had Amy read it over but I'm still not completely happy with it. It might be that it took me so long to write it that I can't sense the flow, though.
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(and if you just want to do general spelling/grammar/punctuation mark stuff, go for it)
The sex felt, to me, a little stilted. I had Amy read it over but I'm still not completely happy with it. It might be that it took me so long to write it that I can't sense the flow, though.
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