Awww but you're so close!

I get the hating of fic and flailing at it cause of reasons, been in that boat a lot.

So far it doesn't seem like it needs so much fixing as just tidying up and poking at for awhile.

If there's anything I can do to help besides edit/comment, I don't mind at all. The story is solid and certainly catches at the heart strings.

Hmm maybe just a couple days away from it will give your brain a rest and make it a little easier to work on?