teen wolf alpha/beta needed

[green]

I need help with a fic I'm writing.

It's due May 18th and I think I have to rewrite the whole thing. D:

I need someone to tell me what to do!

The fic is Peter/Derek/Stiles with endgame Derek/Stiles. It's underage (Stiles is 16) slavefic (sorta) with noncon/dubcon and conditioning and Daddy kink. With lots of manipulation, Stockholm syndrome, And character death (Peter). It's pretty dark. I don't DO dark, so I don't know wtf I'm doing, basically.

Basically, I have 12k words and I want to rewrite or something, plus add a whole other part. AND I want to make it darker. And I am in desperate need of help doing that.

So. Help? my gmail is beingagreenmother and you can either email or IM me.

Comments

[lunarwolfik]

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yea, yea that sounds pretty dark. How is there a way to make it DARKER??? WHAT ARE YOU PLOTTING?!

Which is to say, I wouldn't mind helping.

[green]

lol maybe it's dark enough as it is. I have very little experience with darker fic. most of mine are sappy and fluffy and stuff. do you have gtalk?

[lunarwolfik]

lol, when in doubt, always go for more dark :)

I do have gtalk but I don't use it that much? I'm at lunarwolfik@gmail

[green]

I added you on gtalk, but I can also email with you if you'd rather do it that way?

[lunarwolfik]

Cool cool! I'm gonna try to be on over the weekend, but e-mail is a much safer bet for now.

[lunarwolfik]

I'm working on the fic, plan to finish the beta today. Right now, I copied everything from the shared doc into a word doc and have the track comments/changes thing going (couldn't edit the gdoc).

Apologies for taking a little while, had to tidy up school stuff and the like.

[green]

stop right there! I hope you get this in time. Don't worry about getting it done right away. I've pretty much given up on it... I know I have only 6-7 scenes left to write in it, but I'm just not feeling it and I don't think I can get it done in time to turn in for the Bang. I'm ignoring it for now because I haaaaate it. You know? I feel like that sometimes about fics for awhile and I can't fix them or deal with them without wanting to delete the whole thing, and this is one of those times. I haaaate it. so don't worry about it, okay?

thank you for offering and stuff, though. I'm just so disgusted with it and it's not at all what I planned to write in the first place. it got out of control and turned into something else. I want to finish it eventually, so if you really have stuff to say about it feel free and I will use your suggestions when I get back to it, but until then I'm not messing with it.

[lunarwolfik]

Awww but you're so close!

I get the hating of fic and flailing at it cause of reasons, been in that boat a lot.

So far it doesn't seem like it needs so much fixing as just tidying up and poking at for awhile.

If there's anything I can do to help besides edit/comment, I don't mind at all. The story is solid and certainly catches at the heart strings.

Hmm maybe just a couple days away from it will give your brain a rest and make it a little easier to work on?

[green]

yeah, I'm giving it a few days. maybe that'll help. :\

thank you, bb. <3