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green ([personal profile] green) wrote2009-05-22 08:50 pm
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Fic: Point Work (Kirk/Sulu, NC-17)

Title: Point Work
Author: Green
Pairing: Kirk/Sulu
Rating: NC-17
Summary: There were three things at which Sulu was tremendously apt: flying, fencing, and fucking.

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There were three things at which Sulu was tremendously apt: flying, fencing, and fucking. He didn't think of them as the Three Fs or anything like that. He didn't really think of them at all; he just did them. He was a natural.

Flying was an art, just like fencing. He could manuveur a ship through treacherous space as easily as slicing through a target. It was all a matter of lunges, flicks, and feints.

And although not a sport, fucking had an artistry all its own. There was the beginning footwork as two people got to know each other, a dance of sorts that led straight to the mat. Or to bed, if one was handy.

Most people did not think of fucking in terms of opponents and point work, but Sulu liked the control it gave him. His partners never minded.

Kirk liked it when Sulu lunged forward, pining him to the mattress. Sulu used his tongue as a foil, stabbing Kirk's mouth and nipples wetly. He navigated Kirk's body as smoothly as he flew.

Fucking Kirk was a dance of control and excitement. Kirk said, "Harder," and Sulu teased him. Kirk said, "Slow," and Sulu thrust faster. Kirk gritted out, "Bastard," and Sulu just grinned.

Right now, Kirk was pressed down with his knees to his chest, panting hard and swearing harder. "Fuck, fuck, c'mon, fuck me," he said, and Sulu thrust deep and hard inside him.

Their groans rose up, getting louder as they both got closer to coming.

Kirk was still saying, "Fuck me," in a mindless way, like a mantra. And Sulu reached around and took hold of his cock, stripping it fast and hard, and Kirk finally came, clenching around Sulu's cock.

Fucking into Kirk was like making the winning point, and coming felt like a triumph.

END
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[personal profile] wistfuljane 2009-05-23 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
<3<3<3! The opening line is just perfect because yes.
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[personal profile] athos 2009-05-23 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
The pairing ain't my cuppa, but that last line was something else. Oh yeah. :D
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[personal profile] gwenny 2009-05-23 12:32 pm (UTC)(link)
damn! *melts*
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[personal profile] helens78 2009-05-23 02:23 pm (UTC)(link)
OHGODHELLYES. This is awesome and brilliant and yes, I totally believe that Sulu is utterly kickass at flying, fencing, and fucking. And SQUEEEE to him getting Kirk to the point of calling him a bastard. :D :D :D
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[personal profile] helens78 2009-05-23 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't know if you follow either comm, but [community profile] suluismycaptain and [community profile] chromatic_fanfic would definitely welcome this fic, or a link to it. ^_^
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[personal profile] helens78 2009-05-23 02:53 pm (UTC)(link)
*cheers!*
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[personal profile] amadi 2009-05-23 04:20 pm (UTC)(link)
As the mod of [community profile] chromatic_fanfic, I gotta say I am so glad you brought this to us, and if you have any more lovely little nuggets of Sulu-ness please share those too! This was yummy and wonderful.
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*startled*

[personal profile] ilyena_sylph 2009-05-23 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow.

This was great, and I love the look into Sulu's head here. Wonderful.
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Re: *startled*

[personal profile] ilyena_sylph 2009-05-23 04:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Clarification! Startled because this isn't a pairing I'd ever thought of, not saying anything about your writing or the like!

And you're welcome.
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Re: *startled*

[personal profile] ilyena_sylph 2009-05-23 05:18 pm (UTC)(link)
You're welcome. *wry grin*

My fingers are faster than my brain, sometimes.
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[personal profile] mythicdove 2009-05-23 05:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I usually like a little McCoy in there, but I tell you this was a great fic! Loved the opening line, and I loved how you captured Sulu!
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[personal profile] kerrypolka 2009-05-23 10:08 pm (UTC)(link)
:9

yeah, I got nothing. OTHER THAN HOW HOT IT IS WHEN KIRK'S A BOTTOM AND SULU IS >:D-FACING.
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[personal profile] saavikam77 2009-05-24 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
Whoo!! \O/ *fans self* Yes, I *definitely* like Sulu in charge. *evil grin*
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[personal profile] elke_tanzer 2009-05-31 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
Yay hotness!!
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[personal profile] bridgetmkennitt 2010-07-24 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Hello. I'm just letting you know that I've recced your work at chromaticvision on IJ. Thank you for creating a memorable work featuring a character of color. <3